Monday, 24 December 2007

• Currently Listening Room Noises By Eisley Brightly Wound see related

  "Typical"

  Isn't it just typical when you really care about someone
  and they dissappoint your heart.
  They break it and smash it and tear it apart
  and they don't even know it,
  it's a blind suicide
  to love someone
  silently.
  
  Isn't just typical when you really care about someone
  and they dissappoint your heart.
  They break it and smash it and tear it apart
  and they just may know it.
  It's a blind suicide
  to love someone
  silently.
  
  Isn't it just life when you really care about someone
  and they dissapoint your heart.
  They break it and smash it and tear it apart
  and they just may know it.
  It's a blind suicide
  to love someone.

   

   

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• Currently Listening Begin to Hope By Regina Spektor Samson see related

  "Heartless"

  HATE...
  Do you know what hate is?
  It's when you burn inside
  like the tears in your eyes
  but there is a flame
  that you can't control
  all you hear is his name
  the guy you used to call your own
  
  But you're not important anymore
  someone has taken your place
  someone with long hair and a delicate face
  her eyes burn with satisfaction
  as does your heart in this transaction
  she is his new trinket, his new attachment
  
  Why do you care?
  Cuz he sure doesn't
  and don't you dare
  tell yourself that this was a mistake
  because your lying with every breath you take.
  He was so beautiful and so fake,
  and you left your heart to take.
  
  He turned you into a heartless beast

  With no soul, no motive, no fear.

  Except to steal his trinket and turn her into your feast.

  Oh, I love you too, My Dear.

   

   

  Leave me your critism. Thanks.

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• Currently Listening All The Stars And Boulevards By Augustana Sunday Best see related

  "Oh So Nice...."

  Sittting side by side
  Watching the sky
  Oh, what a fuzzy feeling
  But if the sky was watching us
  He would know you were deceiving
  
  Talking on the phone
  Together but all alone
  Oh, what a fuzzy feeling
  But if the phone really knew you
  He would know who's other heart your stealing
  
  Our fingers entwined
  He tells me I look just fine
  Oh, what a fuzzy feeling
  But if I didn't look fine
  He would be leaving

   

   

  Comment on what you like and don't like... and all that jazz....

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• Currently Listening Emergency (7" Single) By Paramore (7" Single) see related

  "One Day"

  One day I will be with you.
  Nothing will hold me back.
  No sacrifice would be too few.
  Baby this is fact.
  
  One day I will look in you eyes.
  Nothing will blind these pupils of mine.
  Not a thousand knives,
  would keep me from seeing you that one last time.
  

  One day you will love me.
  Nothing will be more lovely.
  No other dream would matter.
  Just stay next to me.

   

  Leave comments telling me what you like and don't like. Be honest or you are no help to me.

  
  

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• What This Is About...

  hey, i'm not here to make friends and i'm not here to make you people that i don't even know think, "hmmm that girl is cool..." i'm here for blunt and truthful critics for my writing... so don't ask me about my life... and don't ask me any stupid questions like what my favorite color is or if i'm hot... because i don't care about you people... i just want to know what the public eye sees in my poems... so if you are willing to be a truthful critic then i want you to be here... if you are looking to cyber or to tell some random person about you're problems this isn't the place to be... i promise... thank you...

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